You've really got your mind set on beating Facebook, don't you. Oh, and: you should have put an "A" as the first word, before "New Social Networking Website"; you wrote "then" when you should have written "than", twice; you unnecessarily capitalized the "n" in "New", the "a" in "Allows", the "f" in "Faster", and the "s" in "Saves"; "new software that can face to video chats" doesn't make any sense; and you should've put a comma between "conclusion" and "Ultrabook" in the last sentence.
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ReplyDeleteYou've really got your mind set on beating Facebook, don't you. Oh, and: you should have put an "A" as the first word, before "New Social Networking Website"; you wrote "then" when you should have written "than", twice; you unnecessarily capitalized the "n" in "New", the "a" in "Allows", the "f" in "Faster", and the "s" in "Saves"; "new software that can face to video chats" doesn't make any sense; and you should've put a comma between "conclusion" and "Ultrabook" in the last sentence.
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